I have now gotten feedback from one person in my peer review group. Although my project is short right now, it was said that it contains good material and insight into what happened to the URI Sailing Team after the coach quit. It was suggested that I put more information about the sport of sailing into the story to help some of you non-sailors out there to make sense of it all.
Also, I have more interviews information from my fellow teammates who are helping me with this assignment. I will be updating my rough draft shortly with more interview questions and answers.
I still haven't gotten a response from anyone regarding my issue, and hope to get some input soon. If you have any information you'd like to tell me about an issue on a sports team, whether it be the Red Sox or the Lakers, please let me know so that I can get more insight on your feelings with sports teams.
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